文中从句的使用的有点少了;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
In 2007, Bill Gates, the repensentive people of computer age, wrote an article called 'every family has a robot' to predict the robot age. He thought that 21th is the robot's age. With the development of technology and the big demand of them, robots can be used in factory as well as homes at a lower and lower price. In factory, it can take the place of poeple to do much work more efficiently and low-cost.Such as in an automobile factory it can accomplish assemblement, transport and printing only depending on a few poeple to control and supervise. For enterprise, it is pretty beneficial in a long term.
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