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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10401
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;全文结构较为严谨。

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There is a popular proverb in economics that don't put your eggs in one baskets. Its meaning in economics is to warn people of scattering risks into different points in case unexpected things cause unsustainable effects. Further more it can be applied to all aspects of our life. several options can give you cushion when you fail to achieve the goals which you expected most. Nowadays, many parents force children to pursue the top universities regardless of their objective conditions such as intelectual or physical condition. once failure falls upon their family, then can not face the reality. sometimes it cause tragedy in their families. Sometimes you d better make more alternative cases when you face big projects. One of them may give you surprise. do not put your hope only on one. if it is unsuccessful, then you will fail for ever. So do not put your egges in one basket. more options you give, more hope you have.

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