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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3529[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
评语:

作者词汇基本功很好,但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可适当增加几条从句。

用户练习作文:

There is an old proverb goes: " Studying is a lifelong process." From my point of view, I difinitely agree and support the truth which is can't be contradicted by anyone. However, nowadays some people who desire to learn and get degrees in college and university but choose to give up do that due to the their older ages. I think it's very regretful as follows: In the first place, the road to go to college and university should not be impeded by any age. As far as I am concernd, there are many postive stories about studying in China even the whole world. Let me take this person as instance, an average bodyguard in Beking University. He never accepted any university education and had dream of getting a degree. Gradually he was influenced by the studying atmosphere of university, so he started to be an invisiors at classroom and frequently to borrow books from library. He realized that he was attracted deeply by studying. So he worked harder day by day, year after year. Eventually he informally was admitted to the Beking university via his indiligence and become a studying model to national students. So it's never late to study. Most importantly. the life will not be perfect without the process of studying in college and university. Unfortunately, some people miss the chance of entering college swing to various personal reasons. But when they got a chance later but to give up which is wrong. the reason will be illustrated by this example, Jakie Chan. He is a very notable action movie star and convey Chinese Kufu inspirtion to everywhere in the world. Jakie once said with much regretion that if time could back again, I would decide rightly to attend school without hesitation, that was my distant dream. Although he obtains countless money and huge reputation which can't make pensation for this empty place in the long river named life. Granted, studying at younger age is better than at older age from the whole picture. Such as younger students commonly have better memories and ablities of understanding and more energies to undertake the pressure from the studying and peers. But the most improtant is loyal and listening to your own heart instead of being impacted by others' trivial gossips. whatever you are and what is your age, it's never old to try to enjoy the joy and happiness that the studying bring about. And the life will not be perfect without the experience in college or university either. So now take action and to chase your dream!

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