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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(93):游客可付费在仿造长城上涂写留言

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:28浏览次数:3967
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For about 120 dollars, visitors to China’s Great Wall can now leave their mark on a fake (仿造) wall built recently in the name of preventing graffiti (乱画) on the real structure.
The management office of the Juyongguan section of the Great Wall in Beijing built the fake wall and will charge 999 yuan for carvings on each brick, daily newspaper The First reported.
  With 9,999 bricks available, the marble structure could help management earn 9.9 million yuan. Juyongguan’s management said they were hoping to satisfy visitor’s desire to leave something behind—usually their name or words of love—while discouraging them form caving graffiti on China’s best-known cultural relic.
The Great Wall, which receives four million visitors a year, has suffered greatly from graffiti. But the project has come under some criticism with The First citing (引用) one expert as saying many schemes to ‘protect’ the wall are actually aimed at getting profits from the cultural treasure.
The fake wall is located near the most-visited section of the real wall in Badaling and visitors usually travel to Juyongguan on their way to Badaling.
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The first reported that travellers can pay about 120 dollors for marking their names on the fake wall built in the Juyonguan's section of the Great Wall by mamagement office.But critists say it benifits form the project rather than protect the Great Wall. With the development of economy in china,travelling becomes a favorite activity for chinese people.However,visitors like to mark their name in the famous relics here and there not only the Great Wall. How to prevent our relics from destroy is the big issue that we face.It is reflected in the social civilization. Today the management office of the Great Wall seems like find a good way to solve the graffitti on the wall. I opposite this action. there are some questions I have to ask. How many visitors want to pay a large sum of money to do this.Secound,Even if they want,it is impossible for them to go to the fake wall to mark their name.It isn't convenient.In my opions,the first thing we should do is that we educate our people by all kinds of measures,such as newspaper,website,and TV. And then as management office of the relics strengen their management,We can make a law to protect our relics.

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