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The first reported that travellers can pay about 120 dollors for marking their names on the fake wall built in the Juyonguan's section of the Great Wall by mamagement office.But critists say it benifits form the project rather than protect the Great Wall. With the development of economy in china,travelling becomes a favorite activity for chinese people.However,visitors like to mark their name in the famous relics here and there not only the Great Wall. How to prevent our relics from destroy is the big issue that we face.It is reflected in the social civilization. Today the management office of the Great Wall seems like find a good way to solve the graffitti on the wall. I opposite this action. there are some questions I have to ask. How many visitors want to pay a large sum of money to do this.Secound,Even if they want,it is impossible for them to go to the fake wall to mark their name.It isn't convenient.In my opions,the first thing we should do is that we educate our people by all kinds of measures,such as newspaper,website,and TV. And then as management office of the relics strengen their management,We can make a law to protect our relics.