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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇表达恰当，同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
It was a long time before I realize the importance of keep learning and do something be meaningful. while two years ago, My father told me that if i want to be a formidable person,I must be endurable and firm to complete crucial event so that I can demonstrate that I am competent to finish affair. consequently i initiate to trial myself not only physical that benefit my body but also spirit to make me tough. I go to swimming pool, running on the playground, play basketball and soon. It really make me delight and make me more health hence i can do something dedicated. The most important is that i know how keep learning is important.
