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小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:46浏览次数:3106
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用英语描述下我的假期,字数在100字以内.
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;文章上下文衔接自然;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

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Dear Customer As for me,today is a lucky day,beacuse my customer gave me a big order of water fed pole brush again.We have been working for three years,thanks for your aways trust and support.I know,we have have many times of contradictions and conflicts but you gave me more understanding and tolerance and still trust me ,that is my greatest happiness of encounter you the so reasonable client (friend ). As the saying goes,sales and workshops is hard to reach balance.And my experience is the factory and client is also difficult to wish all goes better.There always have the unexpected situation leads to delays in delivery.But we will try our best to do better. You know,your understanding make us have more confident in inproving the water fed pole brush products.Under your promotion and supervison,the water fed pole brush become more and more better.The locking force is stronger,the pole extends longer , the feeling more comfortable. I would like to say that yours satisfation is our ultimate pursuit---Sincere thank you-my dear customer (friend)

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