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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
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作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, more and more people judge a person by their appearance . I think it is a erroneous way to predict the morality and personality of a person because an old saying that you can not judge a book by its cover. This is a example around me is my nebourhood who is a bedraggled older, he has terrible smell and always wear poorly. In the eyes of pedestrians, it seems that he is a begger due to his appearance and clothes. But if you acquired the information that he is a chief executive officer, i think you will quickly change your opinion about him.Actualy, he has a larger chunk of money. When i ask why he hate to part with money and change old house for new villa,and he says that he don not think he should waste money just because he have much of it, and the most of all thrifty is not only a virtue but also a revenue. I learned a lot from his words.It is a unintegrated way to judge a person just by his outlook. In a word,it is high time that we should have a standard judgement for other person, not just the appearance but the morality and personality.

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