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小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:46浏览次数:3106
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用英语描述下我的假期,字数在100字以内.
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作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章上下文衔接自然。

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Dear Customer As for me,today is a lucky day,because my customer gave me a big order of water fed pole brush again.We have been working for three years,thanks for your always trust and support.I know,we have many times of contradictions and conflicts but you gave me more understanding and tolerance and still trust me ,that is my greatest happiness of encounter you the so reasonable client (friend ). As the saying goes,sales and workshops are hard to reach the balance.And my experience is the factory and client is also difficult to wish all goes better.There always have the unexpected situation leads to delays in delivery.But we will try our best to do better. You know,your understanding make us have more confident in improving the water fed pole brush products.Under your promotion and supervision,the water fed pole brush become more and more better.The locking force is stronger,the pole extends longer , the feeling more comfortable. I would like to say that yours satisfaction is our ultimate pursuit---Sincere thank you-my dear customer (friend)

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