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【题目要求】
People are frequently confronted with huge amounts of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think the advertising industry exerts an influence upon people’s lives? And what measures could be adopted to counter the risk of the disastrous effects?
【题目翻译】
应对竞争，不同公司打出各式各样的广告，霎时间，铺天盖地的广告向人们席卷而来!
广告在多大程度上影响了人们的生活?应该采取哪些措施应对广告所带来的不良影响?
【题目关键词】
advertisements; exert an influence upon; adopt measures
【写作小贴士】
此类题目是典型的blended essay的写法，开头结尾相对容易，body paragraphs分为两段展开，按照题目提问的先后顺序：首先，第一问可以写广告所带来的诸多benefits，比如：广告让我们更加清晰了解产品特点getting a better understanding of how the products work;成为大多数企业的收入来源sources of revenue;部分广告向人们宣传健康生活方式，让人们生活更加幸福快乐more contented。当然也可以写drawbacks，例如：很多商业广告的虚假宣传误导了消费者消费misleading customers;部分广告内容低俗，对青少年的身心发展不利negative effects on mental health;广告泛滥使广告形象大打折扣contribute to a bad self-image。其次，针对问题提出解决的solutions，这里可以从政府的角度切入，广告利弊兼有，政府应当积极引导，以便广告更好地服务于民众。
【写作语汇一览表】
1.in response to an advertisement回应广告
2.commercials商业广告
3.informative传递信息
4.hooks圈套
5.tricks and catchy phrases花言巧语
6.Advertising is now a circus-show.广告现在就像是在进行马戏表演。
7.be immune to the influence of advertising不受广告的影响
8.subtle不易察觉
9.a great variety of beautiful products玲琅满目的商品
【写作例句推荐】
1. The effect advertising has on our society may be subtle, and most of us remain unaware of how it molds us to fill in the particular company’s needs.
2.While advertising is useful for a host of things, from selling products, to putting public announcements on the air, some of the effects are detrimental as they can intentionally misrepresent “real” people in their commercials.
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中拼写错误偏多了。
How to improve the city air condition has a nasty problem which bother people for long, to solve and appeal people's wearness, some city are banning private vechicles on a particular day, only public transports are available like bus subway etc. From my perspective my ,this activte benifit more than drawbacks. morden people are used to their moto cars for comunicting, the banning activite will surelly make some person unconvient, especially for some people who live far away from their work place, that means on that day, they have to wake up early to cope with that.On the other hand, i would say the public transport system must be facing more pressure, because there would be twice or more people would take the public transport that day, since that ,it's necessary to make well prepation. Less car on the road, that means no traffice conjections. I can bearly imagine what that would be like, take my city for example, everymorning in the rush hour, there must be a serious traffice juncition, ancious drivers horing the vechicle which is quite noice. banning the traffic on certein day , can let people get rid of those terrible circle. Only a day's banning may not changing so much ,but this can reallly Arouse people's awareness of environmental protection .courage people try to take public transport as a main way to communite, that would be a good start.
