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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
作者词汇基础不错，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；全文结构较为严谨。
The teacher told us that we would make an arrangement of the spring outing on this Sarturday.We were exciting when we heard this good news.And then we made a detailed plan to organize our activity.It was sunny on the Sarterday.There were a variety of actvities,such as rowing the boats,climbing the mountain in the amusement park. It was unforgetable for me to climb the mountain.Because we not only had a good time with our classmates but also do a great thing. we found a lot of rabbish on the top of mountain which was threw by the visitors.so we collected and selected the rabbish into the recycle bins or unrecycle bins.We were proud of our behaviors.Finally I noticed everyone should pay more attention for our behaviors as a visitor.
