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There is an unprecedented alternation that most of graduate initiate to learn on internet instead of learning face to face, where learn in school and classroom. Therefore, this situation will generate a depth and spread implication, both benefit and disadvantage. First of all, compare with the choice of attending school, obtaining knowledge on the internet by ourselves is more convenient that we could learn anywhere and any time if we have a computer or a smart phone. The most important advantage that learn by internet is I can learn in my own rhythm, somewhere that I can't understand I can suspend and take a thinking. This is invalid to learn in a real lass. But there is a controversial topic that learn by ourselves is absence supervision that general take by our teachers and classmates. While sometimes we can't refrain ourselves to take a leisure or entertainment. Hypothetically, we may firmly arrive an indisputable conclusion that learn with teacher is a indispensable method to learn, and learn with internet is a formidable choice to enhance ourselves.
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