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I like nature ,so i want to around travilling world .I bileve we have a good time.we can go to france .It is known for have romantic colour.This is my dream to go to france.I very like these feeling.I can shout''i'm feeling good.''arrive there.I enjoy flowers.Flowers look beautful,make me happy.
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