2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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People can live without phone? As far as we all know, phone is deep into our daily life,we use it call our family, friends,and our bosses. With the development of mobile phone,we can use it to take photos in different ways, we can use it play some small games, we can listen to more and more music, we can take a video with each other, and we can see some films need not go to the ciemal. In a world, phone is a good thing. However, we should use it properly and we should know some shortages about it.Sometime we can see some people are crossing the street lookinhg at their cell phines, it is very dangerous! I think we must think highly of it. If people use too much of their cell phones, it will do many harms to their body. Every thing has it two sides,we must know both, and we should deal with it well.