字数:200满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇。
Tourism Consumption With the improvement of life's quality, vacation is becoming more and more essential in Chinese people's daily life. In the past years, the public of China have spent the majority of their time on making a life which also means that they will hardly have time to travel somewhere. Whereas, Chinese tourism is developing rapidly in the past few years. The prosperity of economy and the rich class's emergence is leading a tourism trend which has never seen before. Chinese individuals are not only travel in domestic, but also go abroad for vacation which is becoming more and more normal. During the capital's Day in 2016, the consumption of tourism is totally over 40 billion yuan. According to the World Trade Orgnazitiion's prediction, China will be the largest tourism country in the entire world. In the meantime, China is going to be the nation which has the fastest speed of tourism cost in the few next years.