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2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:57浏览次数:2859
要求:
题目 盲目的崇拜(题目自拟)
说明 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words
要求
1.describe the photos briefly
2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them
3.give your point of view

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Smartphone Addiction With the function of mobilephone's increase, there are more and more teenagers who indulge in phone which also makes them become the people who have smartphone addiction. As far as I'm concerned, it is not a foolproof question to answer whether it is right or not. Whereas, when children use mobilephone as their game machine or toy instead of studying, I 'm strongly objecting to it. At the beginning, phone is created just to communicate with others. Therefore, we should take some measures to make it right. For one thing, responsibility should be taken by parents to limit the time that children spend on smartphone. It is transparently obvious that teenagers spend much time on it so that they can hardly have time on their studies. For another thing, teenagers themselves should be aware of worse consequence if they still are addicted to it. What's more, our motherland will depend on teenager which also means they will play an indispensable role in the next decade.

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