字数:200满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多。
Limiting the Buying of Cars or Not With the development of technology, cars are more and more normal on streets which always lead to heavy traffic. There are several individuals long to purchase a car for their travel so as to convenient their lives. Subsequently, the climate pollution is getting worse so that Beijing has to limit purchasing cars without any doubts. For one thing, there are so many public who approves of limiting the buying of cars. It is transparently obvious that the more citizens buy their private car, the worse climate will we have. The traffic in Beijing is heavy, even almost every city in China has heavy traffic because of cars. Thus, there will be no need to have more cars in the streets. For another thing, there are so many people who subscribe to it as well. Only when they have a car can their lives be more convenient. They have to travel the entire city just to work. As a result, they are wondering how there life would be if I have a car. As far as I am concerned, I couldn't agree with this idea any more. The climate is getting worse, and the traffic is getting heavy, consequently we should reduce the numbers of cars. We still have bus, subway, and taxi without cars.