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Forests Should be Saved Recently, there's a hotly discussed topic that as forest is reducing rapidly, should forests be set aside? From my own perspective, it is transparently obvious that forests should be set aside. After all, we rely on it so much. For one hand, forests play a significant role of keeping the dirt in the ground instead of transforming to sand. We have already too much desert in our planet which always leads to a sand storm. For another hand, trees are indispensable in our daily life. What's more we can not live without oxygen which is produced by green plants. As an example, forests are cut off for fuels and furniture. As a consequence, the number of our desert is increasing at a inconceivable speed, and the sand storm are coming as well. Thus, only when we preserve the forest intensely well can we have a comfortable environment.