小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用偏少；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视。

last week ,my school had have a trip went to Red wood park. At 9 o'clock we took school bus go there,almost twenty minutes we arrived here.this is a large park,it have big trees,plants,we found many things in the park.after lunch ,we played at the playground with my classmate,although,the weather was very hot but all students very happy,what a interesting trip