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文中从句的使用的有点少了；作者在高级词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了；全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays,job is a most vital thing in everyone`s life.My perference after graduation is that I want to bocome a lawer,which is descriped as a scale and respective job.There are three reasons that I choose it. First and foremost,unlike other desk work ,a lawyer need to exercise and parctice more. For example,it`s necessary for them to talk to different people and know every aspects of things a little. Beside,in my point of view,lawer is apply to me ,because I am good at persuading others with a very strong mind tricks. Last but not least,lawer is a job with reference to justy.It can asist weak people to protect their right.It`s a great glory that I can work for jusity.
