文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文中有几处拼写错误,应增加高级词汇的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
It is useful and necessary to discuss the learning habits. There are some connections between learning habits and learning effect. The good habits can improve the learning effect. Individuals in increasing numbers stat to realize the improtance of good learning habits. Therefore, It is such improtant that how to culticive our learning habit? I deem that we should stimulate the interest of learning. We all can attend various activies which can help us find the more interesting things. Not only can we taste the new knowledge but also take the every opportunity to arouse our interests. If i had attended more activities, it would have a better effect now. Were there no some changes, never would us have a good effect.