从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了;可适当增加文中高级词汇的使用,注意文中个别拼写错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
It is useful and necessary to discuss the learning habits. There are quiet a few connections between learning habits and learning effect. The good habits can refine the learning effect. Individuals in increasing numbers start to realize the importance of good learning habits. Therefore,how to culticive our learning habit? I deem that we should stimulate the interest of learning. We all can attend various activities which can help us find more interesting affairs. Not only can we taste the new knowledge but also take the every opportunity to arouse our interests. If i had attended more activities, it would have a better effect now. Were there no interests, never would us have a good learning habits.