文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章用词太过单一,要仔细检查单词拼写;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
It is useful and necessary to discuss the learning habits. There are quiet a few connections between learning habits and learning effect. The good habits can refine the learning result. Individuals in increasing numbers start to realize the importance of good learning habits. However, how to cultive the learning habit? I deem that we should stimulate the interest of learning. We all can attend various activities to find more interesting affairs that we can find th have a good learning habits.