从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了;用词丰富,高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
It is useful and necessary to discuss the learning habits. There are quiet a few connections between learning habits and learning effect. The good habits can refine the learning effect. Individuals in increasing numbers start to realize the importance of good learning habits. Therefore, how to cultive the learning habit? I deem that we should stimulate the interest of learning.We all can attend various activies to help us find the more interesting affairs which we interseted in. Not only can we taste the new knowledge but also take the every opportunity to arouse our interests. If I had attended more activities, it would have a better effect now. Were there no some acticities, never would us have a good habit.