从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;用词丰富,高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
It is useful and necessary to discuss the learning habits. As we know, good learning habits can refine the learning effect. Individuals in increasing numbers start to realize the importance of good learning habits. Therefore, how to cultive the learning habit? I deem that we should stimulate the interest of learning.We all can attend various activies to help us find the more interesting affairs which we interseted in. Not only can we taste the new knowledge but also take the every opportunity to arouse our interests. If I had attended more activities, it would have a better effect now. Were there no some acticities, never would us have a good habit.