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Nowadays, more and more people are raising their awareness to good health. But how to keep health? As an saying goes, thousands readers have thousands Hamlet. Someone considers that they should do some outdoor exercises every day. And others agree to keep a balanced diet. As far as I am concerned, the best way to stay healthy is not only physical health but also psychological health. There are some suggestions for you. The physical health is vital. Some experts say that if you want to keep your body health, you should have regular living behaviors, for example, does some exercises, keeps a balanced diet and has enough rest time. Besides, the psychological health is indispensable. Most of people can not aware they have a psychological symptom. But in our daily life, depression and anxiety are arround us. For example, overwork can cause these mind prolem. To sum up, staying healthy should keep the psychological and physical health at the same time.
