题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Nowaday,there is absence trust bettwen pepole,how it comes?Most of us begin to think that no one can be believe expect ourselves.And there contains too much person hurt others just for their own.it turns out that we just have ourselves to rely on. It is uncommon things,pepole have relationship just because they need to have some thing,just need.which cause there have no friend bettwen,only for pravilegy.pepole will always keep themselves from being taken in,hurt,atacted...so that they have a cautious life,this too lied for me.it just make me feel can not beath.and I feel I have no freedom,something catch me.whatever I willing to believe pepole.this can make me have a normal life ,I can make friends commonly,I can have real life,other thing which hurt me,I do not want to think.I hope everyone can keep on maintaining trust ,so we can have a better life.