文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨。
To:Mary Chen From:Li Ming Data:December23,2008 Subject:Company party Due to I will be going to Beijing a week.However,I can't discuss that all staff is hold a party.It's the time for you to do company New Year's day party.So it is up to do decide on time and places.In addition,as well as need prepare something.