2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句使用量不足；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇使用较丰富，但拼写检查要重视；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。

jane, a poor girl who not beatiful, stubborn, independent, protect her own digest, brave and intellegent. She think about her destiny、value、status and try his best to take charge of them. She has a reasonable understand about her thought and character. She will pursuit her happiness and affection determintely. From jane, we can see the image of new woman now, which is truly self-sufficient, spiritually, emotionally and have the sense of equality.In addition, makes choices freely from her own wills.