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With the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology, the Internet is so convenient and efficient in all aspects of humanity life. The Internet is increasing popularity. It also makes online shopping become fashionable today. There are many benefits for individual of shopping on the Internet. Nevertheless, it has an army of trouble as well. To begin with, online shopping is convenient very much. And people can buy everything what they like anytime and anywhere. And there are more options. Additionally, online shopping also has many problems. As an example, sometimes people might buy something of poor quality. From my own perspective, I maintain that we can look at the comments carefully when we are going to buy something. It's better to purchase something of good quality.
