2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句使用量不足；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较丰富地使用高级词汇；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

Jane, a poor girl who not beautiful, stubborn, independent, protect her own digest, brave and intellegent. She think about her destiny、value、status and try his best to take charge of these things. She has a reasonable understand about her thought and character. She will pursuit her happiness and affection determintely. From jane, we can see the image of new woman now, which is truly self-sufficient, spiritually, emotionally and have the sense of equality.In addition, makes choices freely from her own wills.