2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法基础较为扎实；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

As we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does. The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite.