2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

可适当增加从句和复合句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Nowadays,there is absence trust between people,how it comes?Most of us think that no one can be believed,but ourselves.There contains too much person hurt others just for their own needs.It turns out that we just have ourselves to rely on. It is uncommon things,people have relationship just because they need to have something,just need.which cause there are no friend around us.People will always keep themselves from being taken in,attaked...So that they have a cautious life,and have a mess life. If for myself,it just makes me feel choke. I feel I have no freedom,something hurts me and impacts on my life. Whatever I am willing to believe pepole around myself.This way can make me have a normal life,and I can make friends commonly.I can have real life, the other thing which hurts me have being disappareled.I hope everyone can keep on maintaining trust ,so we can have a better life.