2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇基础扎实；从句使用量不足；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Jane, a poor girl who not beautiful, stubborn, independent, protect her own digest, brave and intellegent. She is think about her destiny、value、status and try his best to take charge of these things. She has a reasonable understand her thought and character. She would pursuits her happiness and affection firmly. From jane, we can see the image of new woman now, which is truly self-sufficient, spiritually, emotionally and have the sense of equality.In addition, makes choices freely from her own wills.