题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Nowadays,there is lack of trust between people,how it comes?we suppose that no one can be believed,but ourselves.There contains people hurt others just for their own interests.It turns out that we just have ourselves to rely on. It is uncommon things,people have relationship just because they need to have something,just need.That lead to we have no friend.People will always preserve themselves from being taken in,attacked...So that they have a cautious life,and their life in a mess. If for myself,it makes me cann't beath.I have no freedom,something hurts me and impacts on my life.I feel very depressed about my life. Whatever I am willing to believe people around myself.This way can make me have a normal life,and I can make friends commonly.I can have real life, the other thing which hurts me have been disappared.I hope everyone can keep on maintaining trust,so we can have a better life.