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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6300
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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Nowadays,there is lack of trust between people,how it comes?we suppose that no one can be believed,but ourselves.There contains people hurt others just for their own interests.It turns out that we just have ourselves to rely on. It is uncommon things,people have relationship just because they need to have something,just need.That lead to we have no friend.People will always preserve themselves from being taken in,attacked...So that they have a cautious life,and their life in a mess. If for myself,it makes me cann't beath.I have no freedom,something hurts me and impacts on my life.I feel very depressed about my life. Whatever I am willing to believe people around myself.This way can make me have a normal life,and I can make friends commonly.I can have real life, the other thing which hurts me have been disappared.I hope everyone can keep on maintaining trust,so we can have a better life.

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