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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

As an old saying goes, we can not judge a person with their appearances, at the same time, Snape jugdements can never be trusted. There are three triggers following below. First and foremost, it is limited for us to acknowledge everything, thus we should use other sides to do us a favor to make this decision. There is one more point, in accordance with the survey, one can not make a good decision with three minutes, provided that you do it, it means that you make it with your emotion not your critical thinking. Last but not least, practice makes perfect, meanwhile, you can not too carefully to think about one affair. That is all my suggestion.

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