2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中从句过少；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

As all knows ,online shopping is a very popular and fashion thing in China.It can make our life more and more convenience.You can get almost everything you want without go out.You can buy things not only demostic but also abroad.It also can provide a lot of jobs.But for another side,shoppong on line make person strangeness.More and more people want to stay at home. A lot of rubbish produced during the delivery.