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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中从句的数量太少；作者词汇表达较丰富多样，高级词汇使用较熟练；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。
Dear Sir, I knew your new product No.5670 during the exhibition held in New York on the date of Dec. 15th to 22nd and I was quite interested in it. Please send us a price list and an instruction. Thank you for your attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. We are looking forward your early reply. Your sinecely,
