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从句数量偏少；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者词汇基础扎实，注意文中极个别的拼写错误。
Professional women is one of the role of women,if women put this role at home,it must be a failure.So the professional women also should be a housewife,when she at home she must devoted herself to her family life,like a housewife.So that ,she can gain something that she can't gain from her career. Although ,some people hold that the professional women face the double stress between the career and family.In this society that it can't give the household labor,his due.the money,a guarantee of life is not the only thing that the career can give women ,it also achieves women's self-worth and meet the demands of the society.Women need a channael,like the career to satisfy their psychology. Ibelieve that having a career is not only for the economic needs,but also a psychological needs for women.In women's career, they can get more self-respect and confidence rather than from their family.So the health level of psychology for professional women is higher than housewife.The study shows that it is not a bad impact for children when the women get out the family and get into the society.The posstive impact is highlight to the girls.So women needn't feel guilty for they haven't enough time with their children.
