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文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒；作者句法知识扎实，但从句稍微偏少；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Professional women are one of a role of women,if women put this role to home,it must be a failure.So the professional women should also be a housewife,when she at home she must devote herself to her family life,like a housewife.So that ,she can gain something that she can't gain from her career. Although some people hold that the professional women face the double stress between the career and family.In this society that it can't give the household labor,his due.the money,a guarantee of life is not the only thing that the career can give women ,it also achieves women's self-worth and meets the demands of the society.Women need a channel,like the career to gain the psychological satisfaction. Ibelieve that having a career is not only for the economic needs,but also a psychological need for women.In women's career, they can get more self-respect and confidence rather than from their families.So the health level of psychology for professional women is higher than housewife.The study shows that it is not a bad impact for children when the women get out the family and get into the society.The positive impact is highlighted to girls.So women needn't feel guilty for their haven't enough time with their children.
