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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6296
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Nowadays,there lack of trust between person and person,how it comes?We suppose that no one can be believed,but ourselves.There are some people hurt others just for their own interests.It turns out that we just have ourselves to rely on. It is uncommon things,people have relationship just because they need to have something,just require.Which result in we have no friend.People will always preserve themselves be taken in or attacked... They have a cautious life. If for myself,it makes me cannot beath.I have no freedom,something hurts me and impacts on my life.I feel very depressed about my life. Whatever I am willing to believe people around myself.This way can make me have a normal life,and I can make friends commonly.I can have real life, the other thing which hurts me have been disappeared.I hope everyone can keep on maintaining trust,so we can have a better life.

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