题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Nowadays,a lack of trust between people,how it comes?We suppose that no one can be believed,but ourselves.For their own self-interest and hurt people.It turns out that we just have ourselves to rely on. It is uncommon things,people have relationship just because they need to have something,just require.Which results in we have no friend.People have been on guard against cheating by others, being used, been hurt.So that they have a cautious life. For me, this let me can't breathe, can't lead a normal life.I feel I have no freedom.that hurts me so much and impacts on my life.I feel very depressed about my life. Whatever I am willing to believe people around myself.This way can make me have a ease life,and I can make friends commonly,I can have real life.The other thing which hurts me have been disappeared.I hope everyone can keep on maintaining trust,so we can have a better life.