托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

从句使用很不错，再接再厉；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富。

When people around me make a decision choosing to do something, I always say "be insisted on it." to them, hoping and suggesting them do it at the same time keep going on ,not easy to give up. So I entirely agree perseverance can let people be stronger. Firstly, physically, using sports for example. If you wish you can be healthy, or even hope to have a good body shape, you definitely need to do exercises, no matter outdoor like park, roads, or something, or indoor like gym. In order to accomplish that goal, the most import thing you need to do is you should insist on doing exercises. if you go running just 2 times, and then never do that after a long time, you cannot complete your beautiful dream.Only keep doing that, you get more and more stronger or gorgeous healthy body. Secondly, let's say something on mind. If you want go to college, you have to be diligent, study hard first. So , you need to keep learning, keep focusing your mind on studying, this will form you a good habit, which will make your mind stronger. Thus, you can endure more pain or stress, you can endure the lonely and boring, you can finally have a stronger soul. Furthermore, people having a consistent heart always do things better than those not, they will be easier to get success than those who give up quickly. Failure is the mother of success, you need to keep do things all kinds of ways, even though , and most of them are wrong ways or directions, you will encounter too many difficulties, but you will at last face the right results. In a word, you wanna do things success, you have to insist on doing things.