2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。

Dear John I am glad to invite you to join my Birthday Party on the friday night 7:00pm. I hope you will free that night, Berry kelly and most of our classmates will join in my Party.I have parpared variety of food for that night, and I collted Melly's new album which is your favorite, we can appreciate it during dinner. The party will hold on SiJi restaunter, In the 203 room , don't forget to take Lisa with you. yours Gunther