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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
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文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇基础不错,不过文中存在个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As a proverb says,"people can't judged by thier appearence,sea can't judged by liters."From this sentance,we can draw a conclusion that if you justify a person by her(his) appearence ,you only can get a wrong result. From ancient times to modern society,there are many hero and empires may have not an outstanding or handsome face ,but they are very excellent by their wisdoms and some else features.Such as French's famous empire Napoleon,though he have a little body,he is obviously arrive a ambitous goal that be a empire which is ordinary people can't arrive.In my view,I think that everyone have thier advantanges and disadvantanges,maybe some people obviously performes,other can not.That's all.To justify one person by his appearence is unwise,because your opinion have deflected. As far as I concerned,when you communicate with other people,you should talk with them more and more ,obvident them ,finnally ,you can get a wiser result .

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