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Traffic congection is geting serviously rescent days, since that some people argued that government should provide free Public transport to reduce the cars on the road, personally specking, I don't apporve of this opinion. Undeniablely, free public transport system do help in some extend, especially in the rush hours like 7:00-8:00 in the morning or 5:00-6:00 late in the afternoon, people might take the public transprot for the reason of free, which could reduce the vehicals on the road. however, most traffic congections happen in the commuting hour, since that I think It's not necessary to offer free transport all day, just provide it during commuting hours that would be enough. Forther more, providing free transport might rise the finical press of goverment, which could couse unequally distribute of social resources, sepending too much money in Public transport system could reduce support in penson fund so forth, which could led to other social problem. In conclucion, I think the authorty should consider just provide free time limited, like just opening for commuting hours, because expect commuting hours there were less traffic jams, and captial fund in estabilshing road system.
