题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Nowadays,a lack of trust between people,how it comes?We suppose that no one can be believed,but ourselves.For their own self-interest to hurt people.It turns out that we just have ourselves to rely on. It is uncommon things,people have relationship just because they need to have something,just require.Which results in we have no friend.People have been keep themselves from being cheating,being used, been hurt.So that they are cautious for everything. For me, this let me can't breathe, can't lead a normal life.I feel I have no freedom.That hurts me so much and impacts on my life.I feel very depressed about my life. Whatever I am willing to believe people around myself.This way can make me feel ease with people,and I can make friends commonly,have real life.The other thing which hurts me havegone.I hope everyone can keep on maintaining trust,so we can have a better life.