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语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文章词汇表达丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
Why do you put all of your eggs in one basket? you know, it is unwise and dangerous.let us see, your eggs instept all of your fortune, put all of these in only one place, like a basket.there is not a place that is safe absolutely,even though the bank. at once there is a violate shaking, all of the eggs must will be broken, then you have to face to the big lost. someone are such a stick in the mud in some ways such as managing their fortune,they think the bank is the best place to save their money. but they don't see there is still some dangerous signs-the economic crisis happends at any time. you can't put all of your hopes on one thing,maybe you will say you must pay all of your attention to it and you must will be succeed, but only enthusiasm is not enough,sometimes you need reason more and more. so to sum up,it is unwise for us to put all of our eggs in one basket, only by our serious thinking and accurate analysing can we find the right way to controul our eggs.
