有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;句式变化多样;文中拼写错误有点多了。
most people in life are prone to choose the truth from waht they saw and heared by chance; while there are still some individuals insisted that we should think twince before making a conclusion.in my opinionn, it's unwise to decide whether it's true quickly without any envidence but believing the scence that we saw and heared. firstly,ervey one has his own idea to make a decision, secondly,
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