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Nowadays, a lot of little students aren't care about the spelling. They donot like to make fouce on the it. However, I think the root problem is that they are get more and more lasy now . The enviropment give them a lot of changes turch on the PCs or phones. Such as if they want to show somethings to other people, they will think about the webo. In my opionins, I think we need to improve this problem. We need to give better enviropment to our children.