托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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Most people think they must win if they join a competition, or it's worthless. However, I don't think so. First of all, I agree with this, to win is the goal, otherwise why you join a game? But, what I want to say is , it's not the only meaning of a competition, if you are not professional at something, but provided that you have strong interest in it, you can still join the competition as a way to make your skill better. On the contrary, the process of a game is also important. You will enjoy it since you love the affair. Competition always means win or lose, that's what a competition is. However, to us, it has too many meanings inside. Join a competition, you need to join training for it , this will let you have some good habits in your whole life. Even though you don't gain prize in the sports, it doesn't matter, you have next chance, and you learn experience this time, this is important for you. Furthermore, there are many many unknown things in people's life time.What you encounter is harmful to you this time, may turning into lucky for you next time. Based on the theory that nobody is perfect, your perceptive is also not perfect. We do do things for goals, but don't give up when you thought you cannot achieve your goal. So you should participate in sports even if you know you will not win. Have a goal is always the effective way to be, but life is like a box of chocolate, and full of surprise, you should go to try everything as many as possible when you can.